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Fallen Petals

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As the colours darken,
And the petals twirl,
The Rose's life is slipping away,
Into that of a cold, dark world.

As it's life passes,
Into a new generation,
It marks a new point,
In Man's domination.

We close our eyes,
And listen to our hearts,
While our breath thickens,
And our hope departs.

We look into the skies,
Dread in our eyes,
And say in a whisper,
"It's time for goodbyes."
This is the first poem I have written in about 7-10 years, so please bare with me.

It seems a little dark, but then again, poems are often a way to describe one's personal feelings in a creative/hidden/expressive way, though mine may seem a little unclear.
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PWTHESNELL's avatar
(The Fallout New Vegas Character (Jerry "The Punk"), Said The Named Of What This Poem Would Be Known As)

(I Forgot What He Called The Category, Though)